Showing posts with label writing tips. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing tips. Show all posts

Wednesday, February 8, 2012

On My Desk

Ever get to a point where you know what you want to say but can't quite figure out how? There are three books I use like a professional juggler to defeat this road block. (hopefully before I decide to take a bite out of my computer)

To find that word that's sitting on the tip of my tongue, mocking me, I often turn to my handy Webster’s Dictionary. Everyone needs a good dictionary and it doesn't have to be anything extensive or fancy. Just a good ol’ worn out dictionary with messed-up bindings.


The second is good for anyone with trouble with homonyms . . . like me. If you’re talking about your lead character, the last thing you want to call her is a heroin . . . that would be heroine. The doctor doesn’t have patience, he has patients. Though, in my opinion doctors should have both. You don’t want to peak someone’s interest, you’d like to pique their interest. And last, it’s not a cue you’re lining up in, it’s a queue. These are just a few examples, but having a book like the NTC’s Guide to Tricky Words is a useful tool.

The last book I keep on my desk, The Romance Writers’ Phrase Book by Jean Kent and Candice Shelton is probably one of my favorite books. It takes a large chunk of the nice little phrases we saucy writers use and puts it at our finger tips. These aren’t the phrases that make you want to gag, these are the ones that have worked out well over time. Like, “his voice echoed her own longings” (pg 66), or “her anguish peaked to shatter the last shreds of her control” (pg 99). This isn’t something that you would use word for word in your writings, but let’s say you get stuck and don’t know how to adequately communicate a flip of the hair being some sort of erotic play. You could flip this book open, see what has worked in the past and then form your own ideas.

What books do you keep on your desk to turn to in times of need?


About R. Renee Vickers:

Born in Florida but raised in various towns in New England, R. Renée Vickers now lives in a small town just outside of Charleston, South Carolina, with her husband and children. And although work and family life leave her little free time, she spends every available moment indulging in her favorite passion, writing.



Wednesday, January 18, 2012

What They Want - by R. Renee Vickers

The modern writer must, at some point, come to grips that there likely has been no stone left unturned. All story lines, modes and methods have been explored, written about and exploited. And yet, authors are still able to write stories that are both interesting and compelling. How? How is it possible when there are only so many story lines and only so many different personality types to explore?

It all comes down to the characters. You don't pick up that famous so-and-so's book to read about the awesomely fantastic scenery, and you certainly don't read eight-hundred or more pages of the latest release because the local wizarding school has interesting tapestries. No, you spend gobs of time, your precious time reading those books, holding your breath for the next issue of that series, and swoon because of the author's unique delivery of their characters. Do you remember what book number five's title was, or do you remember the scandal of what that leading lady had the nerve to do?

Kurt Vonnegut said, "Every character should want something, even if it is only a glass of water."
(Bagombo Snuff Box: Uncollected Short Fiction, http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kurt_Vonnegut)

There are no fancy tricks authors use to come up with these characters. There are no gimmicks. No slight of hand. What every author learns to do to make you swoon, and gasp and fall in love (or hate) is very basic. They create a personality (either off the top of their head or by researching if they want to get really creative) and then give them a want, desire or need. The more believable the want, the more believable the character will be.

On the TvTropes Wiki, they write, "Most people don't care to read about Flat Characters. They want to read about characters who seem like people. People have desires and fears, strengths and flaws; they are sometimes unpredictable, sometimes act on whim, but they usually have reasons for everything they do, consciously or unconsciously."

You can do a web search on what characters want and find a plethora of great resources but they'll all say pretty much the same thing, that character should want something. Every superhero wants, no needs to save the damsel in distress. Every super-villain wants said superhero to leave her where she lays, and ever damsel wants the aforementioned superhero to give the villain a good wallop. Every child wants to feel safe, every housewife wants to feel sexy, every husband wants to feel needed.

Have you ever read something or watched a movie where someone didn't want something at some point? Or, even more basic, do you know anyone who hasn't wanted something?

The more complex the desire, the more opportunities for conflict. Even if on onset of the story, the character doesn't seem to want anything, the dastardly author will make something happen that will force the character realize that either they do want something, or they really don't want something to happen.

This isn't just with the Main Character either. Every character (with the exception of the super-minor, filler/background characters) has to have something to desire. The protagonist(s) and antagonist(s) may fight over the same desire, both sides wanting the same thing. Or they could want to prevent each other from gaining something. Either way, it boils down to someone wanting something, even if it's as simple as a glass of water.

Where there is a desire there is an opportunity for the author to put obstacles in the way, to create drama, to leave the reader wanting more.

In my book, Sly's Surrender, I was sure to give each of the characters something to want. Sly wanted to relinquish her control, Jake wanted to take control, and Tony wanted to be a royal pain in the behind. Did it work? Did they convince you to keep reading to find out if they were successful? I'll let you be the judge.

Blurb: By day Sly is a take-charge, no-nonsense restaurateur, and at night she plays her hand as a demanding mistress. Sly has everything her heart desires: a successful business with loyal patrons, a gorgeous boyfriend and a flair for dominating in the bedroom. Everything she’s ever tried has gone her way, every decision followed to success, every goal achieved, and yet she yearns for more.

One night she decides to try something new, giving up her customary control to the tall, dark, and sexy Jake. Jake is put in a position to prove to his lover just what he’s capable of, and Sly experiences the new pleasures to be found in letting someone else handle her reins.

Need to satisfy your curiosity? Purchase Sly's Surrender here.

Thank you all for reading.

About R. Renee Vickers:

Born in Florida but raised in various towns in New England, R. Renée Vickers now lives in a small town just outside of Charleston, South Carolina, with her husband and children. And although work and family life leave her little free time, she spends every available moment indulging in her favorite passion, writing.



Sunday, January 15, 2012

The 3 Way Dilemma

I asked my husband to give me a topic, any topic at all. He smirked and said 'three way'.
Is it sad that the first thing I thought was 3 way stop signs in traffic?
What does a romance author do when the smut isn't flowing like the glistening juices of female anatomy? When the well of sensuality and places to kiss and suck dries up, what is next?
I can only speak for me, but when I run out of sexy story ideas I turn to one place: yarn.
That's right, I break out a ball of yarn, knitting needles and a new pattern. My mom has even been brought into my smut scene dry spells because she taught me how to crochet over Christmas. Now instead of being just a chick with sticks, I'm also a happy hooker.
After a few small projects (usually less than a week's worth of yarn work) I end up with some adorable projects and a fresh mind that is ready to wrap around dirty things. I wrote Between Elves after finishing up my first sweater...lets just say the twisted yarns and stitches led to one naughty story!
Moral of this blog? I guess there's not a huge one, just maybe that romance and erotica are people too, and while we are sexier than most mortals (I said I burned out in writing, not in the bedroom, rraaaaaawwwwrrr) we each have things that boost our writing stamina.
Writers--do you have a passion besides writing that helps clear the writing pallet?
Readers--what's your favorite creative outlet?
Between Elves
When Blake Toximmo lost her husband and infant son she nearly lost herself as well. But she’s back among the living, fighting to start her life again and find happiness. Her plans for reconstructing her world are drastically changed when she is abducted by Arden Woods, a sexy, sweet climber who she befriending during a mountain climb. In a whole new world, Blake finds herself not only surrounded by new things, but also by people who aren’t quite human.Arden and Quin are elves living in a world that’s not giving them everything they need.They are happy as a couple, but they are missing something and long for a family only a human woman can give. Even with the best intentions at heart, Arden and Quin don’t quite know how to make Blake happy. To make them the family all three need, they’ll have to learn what exactly that means to each of them.
And keep your eyes open for "More Than an Elf" due out in January from Noble Romance. A southern belle taken from her time, Jessica is ready to fight her new reality. Joshua's half elf-half fairy heritage gives him more magic than he probably should have. Because of the magic he spends much of his time alone. When he meets Jessica his world changes, but to convince her to stay and to be happy, it'll take more than patience, more than magic, it'll take More Than an Elf.
Stephanie Beck

Friday, February 4, 2011

The Slick and Easy Way to Hook Up

And no, this isn’t a guide to scoring in bars or anywhere else. Since I
might have attracted a few hopeful studs with the title, before I continue—to quote Joey Tribbiani...

“How you doin’?”






All right, just so we’re clear, I’m talking fiction. Picture this:

Johnny rested his hip against the bar, idly tracing odd shapes on the worn wood counter with the condensation from his beer. A long day straddled on a beam under the hot sun nailing down planks had left him parched and sore. He should have gone home, rubbed lotion on his burns, and crashed on the sofa with some rotgut.

Instead he’d let his baser brains drag him here to watch the pretty young things that had passed the construction site flirt with every rough neck in the bar. Worse thing was, the way the girls laughed jarred his teeth worse than a drill bit grazing a steel girder. Just imagining one of the two under him, squealing in pleasure made his head throb.


Hell, I’m not that horny.

The light scent of fresh clipped green things drifted over the aroma of bar brew and tobacco, so unexpected and sweet he inhaled deep before he turned.

Karen, the daughter of the guy who sold fancy flowers for weddings and such. He’d seen her before. Cute little thing, just back from some relief effort in the jungle—or so he’d heard. Looked like she’d helped her dad around the shop. She sure smelled good.

And if she hadn’t changed in the years she’d been gone, she was nice and quiet.
He slid closer to her and whispered in her ear. “Are your legs tired, honey? Because you've been...”


All right, cut!

Decent scene, normal guy, might even be sexy as hell. But I don’t want him to get the girl. I’m groaning and rolling my eyes already. If she so much as gives him the time of day, I’m hoping she gets some kind of VD.

Okay, not really, but I won’t enjoy them getting together either. Maybe it’s just me, but if I’m going to fall for a quick seduction, it’s got to be handled right. As a writer I know that for readers to fall in love with an erotic hero they have to be convinced that he could seduce them.

Now I’m gonna list 5 ways you can help your intense, alpha hero get the girl. Now.

1. He needs to look in her eyes.

Anyone that says ‘duh’ gets chained to the wall for all our sexy cover models to use so be careful.

Eye contact is often used all wrong. It’s slipped in with dialogue, but if you’re in the head of a male on the prowl, he needs to spend some time observing those big blue eyes he’s trapped under his dark gaze. Are her pupils dilated? (if you’re a writer and you don’t know what that means, please look it up. It’s important) Is she blinking fast? Does she look away and back?

These are clues. Your man needs to know how to use them. He must study his prey.

2. He can’t think about wanting to sit her on the bar and screw her silly—not yet anyway.

Everything in his posture should say he’s content to be where he is, just watching her. If she’s not interested, she’ll leave. But if she’s stayed this long, he’s got one last shot before she’s out of hearing.

3. Now, he may speak.

The words must be chosen carefully, but not seem to be. And they must imply several things. I’m interested, but not desperate. It’s your move. (Of course, if she’s a submissive or a dome and they’re in a BDSM club, the conversation will be a little different, but you can use the basics).

4. Read body language.

If she’s inviting him in, he better not miss it. A little shift forward, the way her legs cross, where the tips are pointed. Is she licking her lips? Has her breathing changed?

5. Now the kiss.

Time to show your hand, buddy. The right kind of kiss can overwhelm all sense of right and wrong and make a girl do naughty things.

Unless he’s caught himself a naughty girl. Then the stakes change. But we’ll save that for another lesson. Imagine the scene above with Johnny taking the time to look at Karen, give her a moment to see that he’s only interested in her, ask her about the flower shop and mention how much he likes the fresh scents clinging to her. Her lashes lower, but she’s breathing fast.

Then he takes her mouth, slow, gentle at first, then firm and deep when she presses against him.

Now he can screw her on the bar and I won’t be disgusted by her. So long as I get my turn. ;)

And now, let me introduce myself (saved this for last because I’m not as interesting as Johnny’s sex life). I am Bianca Sommerland, author of Erotic Fantasies that often includes ménages or polyamory. I also read—a lot—and this post comes not only from what I’ve learned as a writer, but what I expect as a reader. Feel free to disagree, in your head or in the nifty comments box below.

You can learn more about me and my books here
I'm No Angel Authors Blog. I’ll return to the Noble Author’s Blog April 1st to talk writing and sex.

Have a great weekend. It’s been a pleasure.